In an effort to improve the quality of my writing, I'm allowing you (yes, particularly you) to read a work-in-progress script to one of my future comics.
Now, this won't guarantee that this comic will be made and done. Some plans might change, but most of the time it won't. Also, if you wish to read my comics without learning about the jokes and the plot, then obviously the WiP script will carry heavy spoilers. If this is a success, then I'll most likely post WiP scripts to my other future works.
What I'm looking for is feedback. What you like, didn't like, what should be changed, what you think about the plot, the joke delivery, the writing, etc. Constructive Criticism is the key to a successful work.
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Without further ado, here's a script to a future comic, Servers - Gamer Hell (working title)