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In an effort to improve the quality of my writing, I'm allowing you (yes, particularly you) to read a work-in-progress script to one of my future comics.

Now, this won't guarantee that this comic will be made and done.  Some plans might change, but most of the time it won't.  Also, if you wish to read my comics without learning about the jokes and the plot, then obviously the WiP script will carry heavy spoilers.  If this is a success, then I'll most likely post WiP scripts to my other future works.

What I'm looking for is feedback.  What you like, didn't like, what should be changed, what you think about the plot, the joke delivery, the writing, etc.  Constructive Criticism is the key to a successful work.

You probably need a Google account if you want to make a comment.

Without further ado, here's a script to a future comic, Servers - Gamer Hell (working title)
docs.google.com/document/d/1cq…

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Servers Redone Part 4 pg 4 by usaokay
Servers Redone Part 4 pg 4
Sorry.  I was eating a Subway sandwich while writing the dialogue, but on the bright side, I saved 500 calories by just eating at Subway.  Go to Subway today!

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usaokay Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
thx babe
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Cakeu-chan89 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Happy birthdayyy! :iconshibeplz:

Hope yah had a good one! c: :iconmedicakeplz:
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usaokay Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
I have way too many ideas for the Crap Attorney series, but like all good series, everything must come to an end early.  July 15th is when the final screenshot(s) will be posted.

Thanks for the comment!
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OlorilTarmikos Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You, sir, deserve my watch.

And keep up your "Crap Attorney" series, it's so ridiculously awesome!
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Dafuqer7 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday!
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