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In an effort to improve the quality of my writing, I'm allowing you (yes, particularly you) to read a work-in-progress script to one of my future comics.

Now, this won't guarantee that this comic will be made and done.  Some plans might change, but most of the time it won't.  Also, if you wish to read my comics without learning about the jokes and the plot, then obviously the WiP script will carry heavy spoilers.  If this is a success, then I'll most likely post WiP scripts to my other future works.

What I'm looking for is feedback.  What you like, didn't like, what should be changed, what you think about the plot, the joke delivery, the writing, etc.  Constructive Criticism is the key to a successful work.

You probably need a Google account if you want to make a comment.

Without further ado, here's a script to a future comic, Servers - Gamer Hell (working title)
docs.google.com/document/d/1cq…

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Ross Siev
United States
I've been making comics ever since I was in 2nd grade. My very first comic was an interactive crappy M&Ms comic and it just went from there. Since I was crap at drawing and people criticized me, I focused less on drawing and more on video games. Hence, why I am making Garry's Mod comics for nine years. I like to entertain people, so these comics are the entity of my moronic jokes.

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usaokay Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
I have way too many ideas for the Crap Attorney series, but like all good series, everything must come to an end early.  July 15th is when the final screenshot(s) will be posted.

Thanks for the comment!
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obnelrask Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You, sir, deserve my watch.

And keep up your "Crap Attorney" series, it's so ridiculously awesome!
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Dafuqer7 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday!
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LDMythos Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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gufu1992 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
RIP hero to us all.
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